In “Popular Mechanics,” Raymond Carver starts to develop the theme right off with the snow melting into dirty water; he foreshadows their through snow because it is white and consider pure, but the dirty water represents the darkness that is to come in their relationship. Carver also uses diction along the lines of dark and slushed which give the story a negative feeling.
Within a few lines a reading it becomes evident that the relationship between the couple is falling apart. The man has decided to pack up and leave due to the condition of the relationship. The woman also uses the words son of a bitch which shows her anger towards the man.
One point is the man seems to keep a calm attitude about the situation while the woman is yelling and this develops the theme in the way that he had determination to take the baby which can be foreshadowed through the picture on the bed. When the woman takes the picture it also shows that she will not give up without a fight.
When the baby comes into the story the theme takes off like a roller coaster. At first he was covered up which can been seen as a shield and when they uncover the baby it is as if they are opening up their relationship to all that will come.
Once the couple starts fighting a flowerpot is knocked down which play a significant role in the story. The flowerpot also represents their broken relationship and when they knocked it off in the scuffle it showed that they are not careful with what they do and were willing to break the relationship.
In the last few lines the baby is between the scuffle and partly the cause of it. Carver made sure to be specific about where the baby was being grabbed as well, showing that the baby happened to be in the middle of the relationship that had become dark.
Carver does not give names to the individuals because it gives readers a chance to relate better to the story since they can put their own names to it. The baby is the broken relationship and every child that has been through a broken home can relate to it. Also, the baby can be anything that is fought over in a relationship; eventually after fighting for so long it will die or fade away because there has been so much pulling.